will you read my resume for police. tell me where im wrong, where to improve, grammer

Show all answers

Post your answer

2008-08-07 01:28:25 +0000	it seems perfect.:) no mistakes i saw. and im a editor. best answer? Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 02:34:03 +0000	I think it sounds good, but I did catch a typo. Add a d to improvise to make it improvised IEDs. And what about saying supervision of a marine fireteam? It gets rid of one of the "ofs". They should be happy to have you in their force if your resume is representative of you! Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 01:34:37 +0000	I would list what weapon systems you are qualified on, besides that it sounds good Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 01:29:21 +0000	Where it says, "• Able to make difficult decisions in stressful situations" Perhaps change it too, "Quick decision thinking in difficult & stressful situations" Thats all I could think off :) Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 01:28:43 +0000	I'd hire you it sounds impressive to me! I don't know what they're looking for but your grammar is just fine and your accomplishments are plentiful! Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 01:29:09 +0000	No, what is grammer? Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 01:27:13 +0000	If they don't hire you - they deserve what they get! Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 02:30:42 +0000	Everything looks good but I wouldn't say that you qualified "marksman" or list the weapons. There are a lot of marines that are police officers and that won't impress them unless you qualified as an expert. I would say that you are "proficient in small arms weapons". I would also specify what rank you were when you EAS'd. I would also go with the recomendation of saying "quick decision making under stressful situations. Tyris Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 01:36:26 +0000	If they don't hire you, they're nuts! You did extremely well on your resume, and your qualifications are excellent. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 01:28:40 +0000	Awesome resume! You will be hired. Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 01:31:37 +0000	I guess you meant "grammar". No typo found, but you should change "summary of qualifications" to "leadership abilities". Just put "fluent in English and Spanish", not need to emphasize on "bilingual". Don't forget to add the dates for your activities and awards. The employer would like to verify that. Specify the kind of computer software and hardware you are proficient in, as well as how long you have been using them. Other than that it looks pretty good. Good luck! Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No

2008-08-07 01:28:46 +0000	Didn't read whole thing but when I just started reading, I noticed you said bilingual, you mentioned english and spanish. english is probably need, so just say fluent in second language, that's it Was this answer helpful to you? Yes / No